Give general feedback on a finished or nearly finished essay. We caution against one-liners, limericks and anything off—color. Also, the public learned that despite this fact, Bush had won the majority of the electoral votes, resulting in him becoming the next president of the United States.
It is a great topic for conversation and a perfect college admission essay, I believe. Many of them just nod, bored by the common sense of it all. Sushi major ingredients are culture and taste. Three questions reflect the different types of writing pieces: "you," "why us," and "creative" inquiries.
In the first paragraph you talk about what you want to do right now, in other words the next goal you want to achieve.